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Tree Bound

I climb trees
In the midst of a summer afternoon.
No one follows me as I open
The door and step into the garden.

I wear green
For comfort,
And an odd sort of cap.
Mostly for style,
But to make what I do seem
Like an expedition or
Adventure.

I have this rope to get
Up a tree;
The pine that grows
Into the spaces of our leafy plot.

Spiders scuttle past my hands
As I reach out to touch
And hold the branches whilst
My feet make sure they can stand,
Before they move themselves onto
The higher branch or notch.


You wouldn’t
See my still form in the needles if you
Didn’t notice me begin to climb
At the base of the tree.

The father from the house
Next to mine does.
He waves and
Asks, “What are you doing
In your tree?”
To him, I call back,
“Trees cannot belong
To people.”
Then I hesitate, but say
To him, “I am climbing.”

From my shrouded perch, I watch
Him attempt to control wild animals,
But thinks otherwise
When his sons continue their wretched howls.

High in gnarled boughs, I observe
Humanity in many noises and colours.
To myself, I close my eyes and wish:
To be alone.
Tree bound.
:iconcluttercollector:
I was making up a poem aloud whilst I was sitting in the pine tree in my front yard. I then realised it was really good and fell out of the tree so I could get to my laptop and write it down.

For someone who thought they were rubbish at poetry I would say this is a pretty good effort. And according to my English teacher, I'm 'gifted with poetry', after I showed this to her. Really those words don't mean anything, because whilst it makes you feel good, it doesn't actually mean anything. It doesn't mean you're the best and it doesn't mean you're the worst. Also, I've been told this before, but it's not like that. I'm just me and there's no way you can compare me to others.

I intend to post some more poetry on here in time, but I've left my poetry book at school.
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